You did a wonderful job on this. When I first started reading it, I wasn't really sure how I felt about the premise, but you wove the story so well that I fell in love with it. I like the demonstration of Hikaru's dependence on Akira as a catalyst, but I think my favourite parts of this fic were the descriptions of Akira's despair, since they acknowleged the way Akira is also dependent on Hikaru for his inspiration and passion. Great job!

--Alberti